Spot the mistakes!
DISCLAIMER: This post is not in any way trying to humiliate any students. This is not a form of personal attack, whether towards the tertiary institution or the students or the Professor involved.
This e-mail was sent by a tertiary student from N** to their Prof. Names have been changed to protect their identity. (actually more like protecting myself..haha)
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-----Original Message-----
From: XXXXX
Sent: Wednesday, October 26, 2005 2:51 PM
To: XXXXXXX
Subject: Request for extra lesson
Dear Sir,
There is a group of XXXX
(module name) enthusiasts hope to arrange a time with you to seek for your consultation. Can we have our extra-lesson on as usual? However, we can accommodate to any day and time at your convenience.
We have prepared a number of diagrams, and would like to seek your professional opinion and critics in our work products. Below is the list of people, who will be attending your extra lesson. We will be expecting more to attend, and hope to share your experience with us.
1. XXXXX
2. XXXXX
3. XXXXX
4. XXXXX
5. XXXXX
6. XXXXX
7. XXXXX
8. XXXXX
Thank you for your time.
Regards,
XXXXX
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I tell you. I feel like giving them tuition. Not that my English is superb. But even my youngest sister from primary school can tell their grammar errors, weird sentence structures and et cetera. They are trying too hard to sound professional. I say, try harder. Seriously. They add words that are unnecessary. and and...*blows air
7:59 PM
